A sentimental – even slushy! – poem about early childhood when my greatest joy each morning was lying in bed with my mum and swapping sense and nonsense with her …
a secret key to everywhere head to head whisper soft just us two i just laughed snuggle down why does the sun warm as toast who life begun nice and cosy how high the sky safe and sound what where why special secrets only we never to be told riddle-me-ree what say what when is the moon now and always late and soon where our words lost in dark bibble-babble gobbledy-gook che ma pasa shan ti kapo bazi baza yabos yabo little birds calling let them sing airy nothings float in the wind waves on the seashore play in the sand castles tumble sweep of my hand word in your shell-liketickles my ears shush now shush sounds of the seas![]()
This is the intended opening to a long poem about childhood that will explore the relationship between nature and culture which makes us what we are. I’ve made lists of childhood memories – the easy bit – and now all I need to do is write them up!
I may post the occasional extract to gauge public reaction …
What I must remember is that being creative is not an exact science. Things could get messy. A little bird tells me you can’t make an omelette without breaking eggs. And so, the cc-rack of eggshells and rrr-rip of tearing rule-books in my ears, I set sail …
Sounds like a great poem to get stuck into. Who knows where it will go? Omelettes are great. Just make sure you add the herbs and spice.
Great beginning – I loved the juxtaposition.
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Fabulous advice, Opher, no taste without a good sprinkle of piquancy! Thanks, I’m glad you liked it, feel the wind in my sails already …
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Sounds are so much fun to play with…and great illustration! (K)
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Thank you … that’s another word I need to remember … fun!
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Always.
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Enjoyed it Dave. Loved the play back and forth. Looking forward to more. –Curt
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Thank you, Curt, the quill is poised as we speak!
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Love the way this works, both the form, the premise and the content, especially those last four lyrical lines. Looking forward to reading more.
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Thanks for reading, Cathum, there was plenty more I could have included but I was happy to leave it on the beach. However many years pass, I’m still down there with the buckets and spades …
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Less is more, and I was there with you.
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This is so much fun, Dave! Can’t wait to read more.
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Glad you liked it, Tanya. I thought it might be a bit naff but the old softie inside me seems pleased so I’ll feed him some more …
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Lovely, yes. Sentimental, yes. Slushy, no.
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Thanks, Eths, your support is appreciated.
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